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Wow it's not 18+ work?! by Naoki (critique requested)

Wow it's not 18+ work?! (critique requested)

Naoki

Feel free to crit, even if it's opinion about
"Well, I prefer more angular shapes and I think it looks too EVA.."

Although really maybe it could be?? It's a war machine, designed for killing. I don't like it any more than you do.

Ok maybe I do like it. I think this thing looks cool as heck and I hope it blows a lot of things up.

The depicted character is 18+ years of age.
This is not a scene that respects canon of Turbo Killer?

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    No huge dicks and ridiculously bloated boobs!? Who are you and what have you done to Naoki!?

    Hehe just joking, that's a really slick looking mech.

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      The replicant known as Naoki has been replaced by my own original character.

      Thanks!!

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    Neat looking, but that front shield kind of stops the gun turret from being to have any sort of depression. I guess he only shoots things taller than him?

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      That's ok, it can hunch forward.

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    It's cute!
    Though your going to compare it to mecha anime, it looks more like an orbital frame than an Eva unit.
    Looks like it moves very fast and very feral. You can picture it moving like a very mobile wolf or tiger. I like it.

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      Ya! Very organic motions

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    I started on super robots and have been going backwards to more blocky or mass produced robot with my recent RP place. So I am garnering an appreciation for different body types. Seems like a good scout machine to me. You don't need fine manipulators on a solely battle craft. Seems like it should have a better sensor suite on top unless that is something else. I am trying to pick out some thing I don't like and I can't. I like the shading effects. I like the motion blur. I like the shape. I honestly would consider commissioning you for straight robot art if my current characters machine wasn't a blocky as hell Armored Core.

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      Yah it's just a FLIR targeting thing.

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    This is pretty damn dope!

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      Thans

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    It's like an Eva and a Zoid had a blood thirsty babby

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      That follows, as both things you mentioned are also blood thirsty.

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    That is super cool.~

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      Thanks, mean bean

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    Reminds me a little of the mechas from "tenchi muyo: war on geminar" the white one in particular when it fights. All in all, I'd use it. It looks like it's made for hit and run or blitzkreig strikes.

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      That is a very deep cut. Not familiar with that one! Had to look it up haha. ;w;

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        It actually is one of my favorite series to binge watch.

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          For me I usually binge listen podcasts haha ;_;

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    Looks badass, Naoki, would certainly like to have one of those just for getting around x3

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      Thanks! Also I think that might be a little impractical!

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        Still awesome regardless. B3

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    It is reminiscent, at least to me, of genesect and eva

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      Ah I had to look up "Genesect" and I can see why!

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    Reminds me of something from the more recent Metal Gears, actually. Especially 4 and Rising: Revengeance.

    Though regardless of similarities to other stuff (which is not a bad thing), it does look really cool. I like all the detailing and shifting lines on the plates. That swivel camera on top mounted near the turret adds a surprising amount of plausibility to the design as well; looks suited to remote observation or control.

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      Yay for plausibility, a definite plus.
      Thank you!

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    I think it looks cool!
    Reminds me a bit of Blade Wolf from Metal Gear Rising: Revengeance, but with a mounted cannon instead of a chainsaw :P

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      Yeah, I got the impression as I was working on it as well. I did go back and compare the two with side-by-side images and was happy to see that it was only 'well they're both based on wolves' phew

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        I think your design differs enough for it to be able to stand on it's own! It's very cool :3

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          Thankies

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    Gotta practice other stuff, eventually.

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    I love machines designed like living things. All the sleek, exquisite precision of a machine packed within the primal ruthlessness of an animal. It's several layers of Stupid Sexy.

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      Yah there is an appeal to danger

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    I love mechs. Hardest thing to draw. I hope u make more i really like the cyber futuristic stuff. Clean or not.

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      They are bizarrely hard and not hard to draw.
      Like take gundam type robots or even armored core robots: They're incredibly stylized and unrealistic. If you can keep that in mind, then they feel far more approachable. There are genres where they attempt to render the machinery and stuff like 008th MS Team and some versions of Macross, but they can inform how you can limit yourself in your own designs as well instead of adding more and more gun!

      So yeah.. I guess it's like.. Have a lot of references on hand for schematic reasons, but mostly inspirational reasons!

      There are things like the keloids as well that try to make their robots look more realistic, but also show how you can start to depart from the human form as the base of robotics...

      Sooo.. Yeah! I mean. Like. You can do a lot with robotics. They have a broad range of shapes to fill based on their built purpose.

      Perhaps it's choice-paralysis? Hmm hmm.

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        Definitely have to have your imagination used to the style or genre. References is crucial for sure.
        I always had that fetish for sci-fi and future mech or city scape style but have to use a shit ton of geometry like point perspectives and body structure. Not saying its impossible and i will definitely do it but i can see it being a load of work. Ive seen artists go nuts but looking at their stuff including your work makes the brain inspired.

        Evangelion and Ghost in The Shell (series) would be my references. Gundam too but havent watched any of the cartoons yet.

        I recommend since you like mechs, try looking up mechs from the Front Mission games 1-5.

        The wanzers were so kool.

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          Haha it's almost always work. Accepting that explorative aspect of it is very important. Not every little sketch is worth finishing, but... it is part of an experiment working toward something that is worth finalizing... if that makes sense.

          It's finding something worth finishing by experimenting with the same subject in different angles, different poses, positions, and then pouring the effort of refining only a few of those attempts to find the magic. idk.

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    OOO FUCK MAN HE BIG AND MEAN
    shit this is so cool fuck i love how you did the fiery-blast out the back propulsion thingy. the jointing is all so cool too and the motion affects are so good!!! HE GO FAST!!! ZOOOOOOM

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      Yah! Easier to experiment with a more animal design than one based as closely on human I suppose... and full robotic helps give more freedom to like.. just kinda kitbashing parts together lol

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    A robot doggy that plays a deadly game of fetch!
    Love those more organic looking mech designs.
    This picture has a great sense of speed too!

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      Thanks. I picked up on it by looking at manga comics, which translates roughly to "comics comics"

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    RIDE ME CLOSER I WANT TO HIT IT WITH MY SWORD!!!

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    This does look really cool! If you do more sketches like this, I'll definitely be looking forward to them!

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      Thank ;3;/

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    I keep coming back to look at this one. It is AWESOME !!! I'd love to see this guy blow up all of the things. :D

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      pfff aw jeez ; 3 ;

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    Very metal gear like

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      a bit of ray yea