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Ancient Kingdom Hearts: The First Masters chp. 17 by Red Dragonette (critique requested)

Ancient Kingdom Hearts: The First Masters chp. 17 (critique requested)

Red Dragonette

30 November 2021 at 21:50:30 MST

Originally uploaded on Oct 31, 2018

I got all my Halloween ideas for the story after reading about it on https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Halloween and discovering Allhallowtide there. Then I did a half-assed research on Allhallowtide to figure out how to do the holiday in the medieval worlds. While getting more details on it, I discovered a Youtube video on Halloween's history and discovered Mischief Night, which I researched and used for the previous chapter: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hKimIHT1Y4E Anyway, I hope I did All Hallow's Night right, because I'm not a history expert.

Touketsu is an OC of a Dragon Cave forum member named Blackout1233. He created a form for him, but the character never showed up in the RP. I usually don't put unused characters into RP fics, but I felt thought the story could use another character.

Glacies, Chase, LimeX, Kumo, Nemo, Etutu, Roland, Joseph, Brendan and Mrs. Stonewall (c) me
Zephyr, Leohart and Hitomi (c) Psyshock (this is her profile: https://forums.dragcave.net/profile/70864-psyshock/ )
Sakura (c) ShadowNekoSakura (this is her profile: https://forums.dragcave.net/profile/69841-shadownekosakura/ )
Touketsu (c) Blackout1233 (this is his profile: https://forums.dragcave.net/profile/82904-blackout1233/ )
Jack Skellington and the mayor (c) Disney

Kingdom Hearts (c) Disney and Square-Enix

Keyblade War RP was made by Psyshock, but unfortunately it no longer exists as the RP died from inactivity years ago.

Keyblade War arc
Intro - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2056066/ancient-kingdom-hearts-the-first-masters-intro
Chapter 1 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2056070/ancient-kingdom-hearts-the-first-masters-chp-01

A Month's Peace arc
Chapter 16 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2079060/ancient-kingdom-hearts-the-first-masters-chp-16
Chapter 17 - Here!
Chapter 18 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2079220/ancient-kingdom-hearts-the-first-masters-chp-18
Chapter 19 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2079259/ancient-kingdom-hearts-the-first-masters-chp-19
Chapter 20 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2079294/ancient-kingdom-hearts-the-first-masters-chp-20
Chapter 21 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2079362/ancient-kingdom-hearts-the-first-masters-chp-21
Chapter 22 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2079399/ancient-kingdom-hearts-the-first-masters-chp-22

Chasing LimeX arc
Chapter 23 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2079408/ancient-kingdom-hearts-the-first-masters-chp-23

Light's Retribution arc
Chapter 34 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2083697/ancient-kingdom-hearts-the-first-masters-chp-34