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Ancient Kingdom Hearts: The First Masters Chp. 01 by Red Dragonette (critique requested)

Ancient Kingdom Hearts: The First Masters Chp. 01 (critique requested)

Red Dragonette

Originally uploaded on Jan 30, 2012

The 1st chapter with Zephyr and Glacies! The next chapter will feature another character and it’ll be very short. That part of the paragraph between the two asterisks where it talks about magic. I wasn’t sure whether to include that or not, because it might seem confusing to you guys and I didn’t know some better sentences to replace it. For those of you who don't know what Zephyr's clothes really looks like, Psyshock made it to be similar to Sora's final form.

Also, if you haven't started with the intro yet, then read the note (and only the note) on Chapter 16 first for info about this AU's setting: https://cdn.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2079060/fe47243e0f79e6a460b3e53930c99b2ab89947b6a9fc8164d7993ea8fd28d829/reddragonette-ancient-kingdom-hearts-the-first-masters-chp-16.pdf

Keyblade War arc
Intro - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2056066/ancient-kingdom-hearts-the-first-masters-intro
Chapter 1 - Here!
Chapter 2 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2056072/ancient-kingdom-hearts-the-first-masters-chp-02
Chapter 3 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2056279/ancient-kingdom-hearts-the-first-masters-chp-03
Chapter 4 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2056281/ancient-kingdom-hearts-the-first-masters-chp-04
Chapter 5 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2056286/ancient-kingdom-hearts-the-first-masters-chp-05
Chapter 6 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2056561/ancient-kingdom-hearts-the-first-masters-chp-06
Chapter 7 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2056855/ancient-kingdom-hearts-the-first-masters-chp-07
Chapter 8 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2056859/ancient-kingdom-hearts-the-first-masters-chp-08
Chapter 9 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2057157/ancient-kingdom-hearts-the-first-masters-chp-09
Chapter 10 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2057425/ancient-kingdom-hearts-the-first-masters-chp-10
Chapter 11 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2059786/ancient-kingdom-hearts-the-first-masters-chp-11
Chapter 12 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2059793/ancient-kingdom-hearts-the-first-masters-chp-12
Chapter 13 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2060566/ancient-kingdom-hearts-the-first-masters-chp-13
Chapter 14 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2060656/ancient-kingdom-hearts-the-first-masters-chp-14
Chapter 15 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2061572/ancient-kingdom-hearts-the-first-masters-chp-15

A Month's Peace arc
Chapter 16 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2079060/ancient-kingdom-hearts-the-first-masters-chp-16

Chasing LimeX arc
Chapter 23 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2079408/ancient-kingdom-hearts-the-first-masters-chp-23

Light's Retribution arc
Chapter 34 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2083697/ancient-kingdom-hearts-the-first-masters-chp-34

Glacies and red-blonde-haired guy (who hasn’t made official debut yet) © me
Zephyr, Master Leohart, and blue-haired girl (who hasn’t made an official debut yet) © Psyshock
The armored stranger (who will make an official debut on the next chapter) © Gyro22

Kingdom Hearts (C) Square Enix and Disney

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