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Dragon Rage: The First War Chp. 11 by Red Dragonette (critique requested)

Dragon Rage: The First War Chp. 11 (critique requested)

Red Dragonette

10 October 2021 at 20:19:21 MDT

Originally uploaded on Jun 24, 2014

Giftstories taking place during this chapter:
UberCatSR's characters story 2 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2069557/dragon-rage-the-first-war-ubercatsr-s-giftstory-2
Picknick10's characters story 3 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2073952/dragon-rage-the-first-war-picknick10-s-giftstory-3
LordTorch18's characters story 1 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2068028/dragon-rage-the-first-war-lordtorch18-s-giftstory-1
Shibathedragon's characters story 1 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2064907/dragon-rage-the-first-war-shibathedragon-s-giftstory-1
Shibathedragon's characters story 2 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2070683/dragon-rage-the-first-war-shibathedragon-s-giftstory-2
Enkaharal's characters story 2 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2068803/dragon-rage-the-first-war-enkaharal-s-giftstory-2
Eveeoni's characters story 4 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2075092/dragon-rage-the-first-war-eveeoni-s-giftstory-4
Picknick10's characters story 4 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2076435/dragon-rage-the-first-war-picknick10-s-giftstory-4
Flamedramon2657's characters story 1 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2065871/dragon-rage-the-first-war-flamedramon2657-s-giftstory-1

I was going to put a sword training scene in this chapter, but I would have ended up making it longer than it should have been. A new protagonist will be showing up in the next chapter and she'll be having a romantic story in this fanfic, stay tuned!

I've gotten the magic spells in this story from sites like http://www.spellsandmagic.com/beginner.html and http://www.magickspellcraft.com/component/rapidrecipe/category/all-beginner-spells

I used the shortened version of the Basic Archery Techniques: http://www.learn-archery.com/basic-archery.html

Kathia, Mrs. Merryweather, Aeolus, Doubloon, Eitri, Leafwing, Corona, Zylanon, Lutarn, and Hewey (c) me
Jason (c) En'K'Haral (this is his profile page: https://forums.dragcave.net/profile/54282-enkharal/ )

You can see the RP at this following link: http://forums.dragcave.net/index.php?showtopic=152686&st=0

Great War: Dragons vs Humans (c) picknick10
Story written by me
Dragon Cave (c) TJ09 (a.k.a. T.J. Lipscomb)

List of chapters
Prologue - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2059799/dragon-rage-the-first-war-prologue
Chapter 1 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2059807/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-1
Chapter 2 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2060574/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-2
Chapter 3 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2060675/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-3
Chapter 4 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2061040/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-4
Chapter 5 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2061315/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-5
Chapter 6 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2061317/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-6
Chapter 7 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2061836/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-7
Chapter 8 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2062617/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-8
Chapter 9 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2062638/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-9
Chapter 10 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2063112/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-10
Chapter 11 - Here!
Chapter 12 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2063701/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-12
Chapter 13 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2063966/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-13
Chapter 14 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2064288/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-14
Chapter 15 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2064471/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-15
Chapter 16 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2064887/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-16
Chapter 17 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2064903/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-17
Chapter 18 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2065161/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-18
Chapter 19 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2065165/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-19
Chapter 20 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2065171/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-20
Chapter 21 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2065180/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-21
Chapter 22 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2065479/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-22
Chapter 23 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2065765/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-23
Chapter 24 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2065771/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-24
Chapter 25 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2065865/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-25
Chapter 26 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2066204/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-26
Chapter 51 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2075140/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-51

Table of Giftstories - https://www.weasyl.com/submissions?userid=195211&folderid=114231