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Dragon Rage: The First War chp. 23 by Red Dragonette (critique requested)

Dragon Rage: The First War chp. 23 (critique requested)

Red Dragonette

18 October 2021 at 19:20:02 MDT

Originally uploaded on Nov 28, 2014

Giftstories taking place during this chapter:
Forsaken Rider of Dreams's character story 2 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2071577/dragon-rage-the-first-war-forsaken-rider-of-dreams-s-giftstory-2
UberCatSR's characters story 2 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2069557/dragon-rage-the-first-war-ubercatsr-s-giftstory-2
Psyduck's characters story 1 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2068006/dragon-rage-the-first-war-psyduck-s-giftstory-1
rampaging wyvern's character story 1 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2073487/dragon-rage-the-first-war-rampaging-wyvern-s-giftstory-1
Flamedramon2657's characters story 3 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2075041/dragon-rage-the-first-war-flamedramon2657-s-giftstory-3
Eveeoni's characters story 8 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2082022/dragon-rage-the-first-war-eveeoni-s-giftstory-8
Draco8967's characters story 3 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2076055/dragon-rage-the-first-war-draco8967-s-giftstory-3
SparksflY's characters 1 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2068811/dragon-rage-the-first-war-sparksfly-s-giftstory-1
Enkaharal's characters story 4 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2076043/dragon-rage-the-first-war-enkaharal-s-giftstory-4
Enkaharal's characters story 5 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2078007/dragon-rage-the-first-war-enkaharal-s-giftstory-5
Draco8967's characters story 4 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2078050/dragon-rage-the-first-war-draco8967-s-giftstory-4
Zeditha's characters story 2 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2071842/dragon-rage-the-first-war-zeditha-s-giftstory-2

Here's this funny typo I found while making this chapter: Merkath still growled a little bit longer before heading over to his brother, and press his head against Axle chest in a genital way.

And finally, don't expect to see the Zeditha vs the horde fight in the main story; that's going to left up to one of Zeditha's stories.

Atlas, Aeolus, Danielle, Kylie, Doubloon, Eitri, Kekul, Enamora, Cirrus, Firefry, Ursula, Lokola, Serhorn, and Biskel (c) me
Axle, Spinx, Mekarth and Strider (c) Lorddraco8967 from Deviant Art
Zeditha (c) Zeditha (this is her profile: https://forums.dragcave.net/index.php?showuser=209782 )

Great War: Dragons vs Humans (c) picknick10 from Deviant Art
Story written by me
Dragon Cave (c) TJ09 (a.k.a. T.J. Lipscomb)

List of chapters
Prologue - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2059799/dragon-rage-the-first-war-prologue
Chapter 1 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2059807/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-1
Chapter 2 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2060574/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-2
Chapter 3 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2060675/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-3
Chapter 4 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2061040/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-4
Chapter 5 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2061315/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-5
Chapter 6 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2061317/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-6
Chapter 7 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2061836/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-7
Chapter 8 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2062617/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-8
Chapter 9 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2062638/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-9
Chapter 10 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2063112/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-10
Chapter 11 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2063467/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-11
Chapter 12 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2063701/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-12
Chapter 13 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2063966/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-13
Chapter 14 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2064288/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-14
Chapter 15 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2064471/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-15
Chapter 16 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2064887/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-16
Chapter 17 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2064903/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-17
Chapter 18 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2065161/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-18
Chapter 19 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2065165/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-19
Chapter 20 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2065171/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-20
Chapter 21 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2065180/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-21
Chapter 22 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2065479/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-22
Chapter 23 - Here!
Chapter 24 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2065771/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-24
Chapter 25 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2065865/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-25
Chapter 26 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2066204/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-26
Chapter 51 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2075140/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-51

Table of Giftstories - https://www.weasyl.com/submissions?userid=195211&folderid=114231