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Dragon Rage: The First War chp. 16 by Red Dragonette (critique requested)

Dragon Rage: The First War chp. 16 (critique requested)

Red Dragonette

15 October 2021 at 15:23:55 MDT

Originally uploaded on Oct 8, 2014

Giftstories taking place during this chapter:
rampaging wyvern's character story 1 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2073487/dragon-rage-the-first-war-rampaging-wyvern-s-giftstory-1
Flamedramon2657's characters story 3 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2075041/dragon-rage-the-first-war-flamedramon2657-s-giftstory-3
Eveeoni's characters story 7 - (link will be put here in the future)
Picknick10's characters story 6 - (link will be put here in the future)
LordTorch18's characters story 2 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2072930/dragon-rage-the-first-war-lordtorch18-s-giftstory-2
Enkaharal's characters story 3 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2073494/dragon-rage-the-first-war-enkaharal-s-giftstory-3

That part about Kathia going out to eat with Jason, I had forgotten that she had already eaten earlier. Also, I would have added more to Aeolus's last section, but I felt it would have made the chapter longer than it should be. So I ended it with what Atlas is doing at her beginning of the morning.

Kathia, Aeolus, Atlas, Danielle, Eitri, Zylanon, Lutarn, Corona, Bam, Leafwing, Hewey, Stormy, Tavurth, Eatorn, Volkin, Drakor, Udiya, Rainstorm, Mitya, Nimbus, Lhukijita and Mrs. Merryweather (c) me
Jason (c) Enkaharal from Deviant Art
Zeditha (c) Zeditha (this is her profile: http://forums.dragcave.net/index.php?showuser=209782 )

You can see the RP at this following link: http://forums.dragcave.net/index.php?showtopic=152686&st=0

Great War: Dragons vs Humans (c) picknick10
Story written by me
Dragon Cave (c) TJ09 (a.k.a. T.J. Lipscomb)

List of chapters
Prologue - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2059799/dragon-rage-the-first-war-prologue
Chapter 1 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2059807/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-1
Chapter 2 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2060574/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-2
Chapter 3 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2060675/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-3
Chapter 4 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2061040/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-4
Chapter 5 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2061315/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-5
Chapter 6 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2061317/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-6
Chapter 7 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2061836/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-7
Chapter 8 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2062617/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-8
Chapter 9 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2062638/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-9
Chapter 10 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2063112/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-10
Chapter 11 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2063467/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-11
Chapter 12 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2063701/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-12
Chapter 13 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2063966/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-13
Chapter 14 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2064288/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-14
Chapter 15 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2064471/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-15
Chapter 16 - Here!
Chapter 17 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2064903/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-17
Chapter 18 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2065161/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-18
Chapter 19 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2065165/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-19
Chapter 20 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2065171/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-20
Chapter 21 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2065180/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-21
Chapter 22 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2065479/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-22
Chapter 23 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2065765/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-23
Chapter 24 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2065771/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-24
Chapter 25 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2065865/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-25
Chapter 26 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2066204/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-26
Chapter 51 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2075140/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-51

Table of Giftstories - https://www.weasyl.com/submissions?userid=195211&folderid=114231