I am still not 100 percent happy with this one, either, but I am through trying for now. I can't quite put my finger on WHAT is just not right with this drawing, but it sure it annoying. I noticed that when I turn a drawing straight up and down it seems different to me than when it's flat on a table, so I think I might be doing more of this while I am drawing. There is something funny going on with a skew in my vision or something that I don't notice until I see it vertically on a screen.
I didn't actually find any reference pictures of Lucci just looking content and maybe even happy, but I just felt like doing something unusual with the character.
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It's less cluttered than the first attempt.