Music and art owned by TheOtherEliArts2001
I like it! It’s mysterious and gives off an eerie vibe. My personal imput is try to have more variation and not to be redundant, in order to keep the listeners engaged. Again, that’s my opinion, but it does sound good! (I also dislike songs with long tones from just one instrument at the beginning, but that might be because I like fast songs. Idk, you do you.)
I'm glad you like certain aspects about it. The whole "mysterious" and "eerie" vibe were definitely what I was going for. However, I will try to take your critique to heart. Though I'm obviously still amateur at music making, and I'm still practicing. But I will try to add more variation in my next piece.
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X. Cytilinsk
I like it! It's sad, heavy, and ominous.