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Ancient Kingdom Hearts: The First Masters chp. 38 by Red Dragonette (critique requested)

Ancient Kingdom Hearts: The First Masters chp. 38 (critique requested)

Red Dragonette

I kept the fight between Ilem and Light short because I wanted to be able to cram in all the remaining scenes before the day in the story ends. That way I can start off the next chapter with a new morning.

Glacies, Chase, Kumo, Nemo, LimeX, Juliet, Ilem, Etutu/Xander, Nuru/Merelyn, Shade, Connor, Lumine, Sevrin, Roland, Pope Hollur, Baki, Safiya, Tertia, Nora and Hilda (c) me
Zephyr, Hitomi and Hikari/Light (c) Psyshock (this is his profile: https://forums.dragcave.net/profile/70864-psyshock/ )
Sakura (c) ShadowNekoSakura (this is her profile: https://forums.dragcave.net/profile/69841-shadownekosakura/ )
Thage/Divinity (c) gistofeverything (this is her profile: https://forums.dragcave.net/profile/120849-gistofeverything/ )
Valer (C) Finalfantazoid (this is his profile: https://forums.dragcave.net/profile/189462-finalfantazoid/ )
Zero (c) Disney

Kingdom Hearts (C) Square-Enix and Disney

Keyblade War arc
Intro - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2056066/ancient-kingdom-hearts-the-first-masters-intro
Chapter 1 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2056070/ancient-kingdom-hearts-the-first-masters-chp-01

A Month's Peace arc
Chapter 16 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2079060/ancient-kingdom-hearts-the-first-masters-chp-16

Chasing LimeX arc
Chapter 23 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2079408/ancient-kingdom-hearts-the-first-masters-chp-23

Light's Retribution arc
Chapter 34 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2083697/ancient-kingdom-hearts-the-first-masters-chp-34
Chapter 35 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2084627/ancient-kingdom-hearts-the-first-masters-chp-35
Chapter 36 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2085309/ancient-kingdom-hearts-the-first-masters-chp-36
Chapter 37 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2090442/ancient-kingdom-hearts-the-first-masters-chp-37
Chapter 38 - Here!
Chapter 39 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2124363/ancient-kingdom-hearts-the-first-masters-chp-39