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Dragon Rage: The First War chp. 45 by Red Dragonette (critique requested)

Dragon Rage: The First War chp. 45 (critique requested)

Red Dragonette

Originally uploaded on Jan 4, 2016

Giftstories taking place during this chapter:
Draco8967's characters story 7 -
Cynder_Dragonborn's characters story 2 -
rampaging_wyvern's character story 2 -
UberCatSR's characters story 4 -
Corinnycat's character story 1 -
IDoNotExist's characters story 1 -
Draco8967's characters story 8 -

Sorry for not showing you the villager's battle against Arch's forces in this chapter and last one. But remember, this story is supposed to focus on my main characters from here on out until the big event. Minor ones like the horde members will have to be seen on other player's gift stories.

Here's why Drake called Ms. Linsen a young lady: Being over 200, Drake enjoyed calling women 'young lady'. His way of having a little fun with humans.

And a little fun fact about Akil: She thought about her survival training Axle gave her when he was around, and one lesson was, Eat anything that is food, even if it does not agree with you. It was a weird lesson, but now was the time to put it tot he test. She study the pear carefully and soon removed it from the prikely thing that held it and tried it. To her surprise it was sweet, but a bit bitter at the same time as if it was like a orange. Though she rather eat meat than eat fruits, food is still food.

Atlas, Aeolus, Minerva, Danielle, Kylie, Bam, Eitri, Hewey, Firefry, Volkin, Pinky, Smasp, Pendra and Ms. Linsen (c) me
Axle, Mekarth, Juna, Akil, Dracul, Arch, Lucian and Shadow (c) lorddraco8967 from
Ronan and Drake (c) LordTorch18 (this is his profile: )

You can see the RP at this following link:

Great War: Dragons vs Humans (c) picknick10 from Deviant Art
Story written by me
Dragon Cave (c) TJ09 (a.k.a. T.J. Lipscomb)

List of chapters
Prologue -
Chapter 1 -
Chapter 26 -
Chapter 27 -
Chapter 28 -
Chapter 29 -
Chapter 30 -
Chapter 31 -
Chapter 32 -
Chapter 33 -
Chapter 34 -
Chapter 35 -
Chapter 36 -
Chapter 37 -
Chapter 38 -
Chapter 39 -
Chapter 40 -
Chapter 41 -
Chapter 42 -
Chapter 43 -
Chapter 44 -
Chapter 45 - Here!
Chapter 46 -
Chapter 47 -
Chapter 48 -
Chapter 49 -
Chapter 50 -
Chapter 51 -

Table of Giftstories -