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Dragon Rage: The First War (Corinnycat's giftstory 1) by Red Dragonette (critique requested)

Dragon Rage: The First War (Corinnycat's giftstory 1) (critique requested)

Red Dragonette

Originally uploaded on Nov 30, 2016

So since Flamanti's story overlaps with Eric's, I'm going to expect less copy-and-pasted parts compared to my original written parts in IDoNotExist's first giftstory.

Facts that might not be mentioned later

  • When he first encounters Flamanti, Eric is looking around behind him, but then Flamanti blocks his escape routes.
  • Rick isn't a practitioner of magic, but he knows the basics of it.
  • Emotions, when put into expressions, were things that Rick can read of people.
  • Eric doesn't know if he would like Windfall as he isn't much of a city person.
  • Rina and Raven have never seen a horse before.
  • Even though Flamanti is testing Raven's patience, he likes her attitude.

Funny typo found in the RP
As Blaze caught up to him, Eric hurriedly ushered the car into his backpack compartment, to the obvious displeasure of Blaze.

Flamanti (c) Corinnycat (this is her profile: )
Ronan, Drake and Rick (c) LordTorch18 (this is his profile: )
Rina and Raven (c) UberCatSR from Deviant Art
Eric and Blaze (c) IDoNotExist (this is his profile: )

You can see the RP at this following link:

Great War: Dragons vs Humans (c) picknick10
Story written by me
Dragon Cave (c) TJ09 (a.k.a. T.J. Lipscomb)

List of chapters
Prologue -
Chapter 1 -
Chapter 26 -
Chapter 51 -

Table of Giftstories -