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Lubo Chapter 1 Page 19 (Last) by JomoOval (critique requested)

Lubo Chapter 1 Page 19 (Last) (critique requested)

JomoOval

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The final page of the first chapter is finally done after about 2 months. I'm not sure about how I feel about it being 19 pages long instead of exactly 20, but there's nothing else to add, and anything extra I feel would just be unnecessary teasing. Besides, I technically have 20 pages exactly if I count the cover for this chapter.

Anything the reader may be wondering from the last panel will most likely be explained in the next chapter. I figured I'd only put things related to the next chapter as a teaser if there is going to be one. This panel actually wasn't in the script originally and I had not thought of what to put in the last panel until I got the idea a few days before starting this page.

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    That moon reminds me a lot of Luigi's Mansion dark Moon.

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      What moon?

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        The crystal one at the bottom.

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          Oh okay. It's not exactly a moon but it's shaped like a moon for a reason

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    Hearts stars and horseshoe, clovers and blue moons!