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Fugaia - Lubo Volume 1 Cover by JomoOval (critique requested)

Fugaia - Lubo Volume 1 Cover (critique requested)

JomoOval

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Chapter List
1 - A Difference Like Day and Night
2 - Dracmore's Revenge
3 - Lubo's Reason to Fight
4 - His Resentment of Lopu
5 - Hot-headed Battle
6 - The Mugger of Jatui
7 - Clearing His Name
8 - Mystery of the Trees
9 - Lubo's Ambition
10 - Bandanna of Courage

Commentary:
Okay so I made a cover for Volume 1 after finishing Chapter 1. But I decided that it wasn't dynamic enough and was more fitting for an end cover instead. So I made a new front cover.

The comment from February 2017 applies to the back cover now.
https://www.weasyl.com/~jomooval/submissions/1536861/fugaia-lubo-volume-1-end

I made it to mimic chapter 1's cover a bit on purpose. Like it's a reveal of the silhouette from the previous cover. And at the same time I want to tease the sword that Lubo gets later.

Also the old volume cover didn't even feature a dawning sun. Good job, past me.

Submission Information

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    As a comic cover, it's kind of meh, really. The background objects are not outlined in black like he is, making it look like a model or a backdrop that's not really there. Your shadows certainly agree with your lighting, but all of the shapes and such don't agree with the character walking through them. And that's sort of the other problem, he's just walking along. Not a very exciting thing to make people wanna read your comic. :(

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      That is regrettable, but you have a point.