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I keep using the size 9 with the pen tool even for panels that have the characters closer in view. I usually do larger sizes for those, but I've been forgetting for quite a few pages.
I was also THIS close to drawing normal Lubo with a moon symbol on his belly by mistake. Probably because I haven't drawn normal Lubo's body ever since page 11.
In panel 5, the ボン reads as "bon" and it's basically used for a magical transformation. Spoiler Alert: Lubo has magic!
Light grey and dark grey aren't MUCH to go on for a transformation, especially at night when its dark. It's hard to tell, even his massive hands don't change much in proportion to the rest of him. Without another person next to him, his transformation could be something as simple as a lighting change. Just make sure the necklace is much, MUCH smaller when he's transformed, yes?
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