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Lubo Chapter 1 Page 17 by JomoOval (critique requested)

Lubo Chapter 1 Page 17 (critique requested)

JomoOval

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If you're wondering, Lubo did not bring Luna home yet because he was too afraid of moving her for he did not know how badly hurt she was. He did at the very least remove the ropes.

Also doing a slightly different color for the sky since it's almost 5am. I should really make a chart sometime to make it easy for me to remember what color settings I have for each time of day. I use no color filter, by the way, when it is daytime.

Japanese time!
くよくよ "kuyo kuoy" is the sound effect for worrying.
ブーンブーン "buun buun" is shaking.
パーン "paan" is WHACK/SLAP. Kept it vague on purpose.

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    ...seems about right, as far as reactions go, haha. I still have to oogle at the MASSIVE tree stump. Or maybe they're just small? Hard to tell.