New page, finally. I've decided once I'm finished that I'm going to go back and fix a few things. Anatomy issues, facial expressions, continuity - things that I didn't notice at first but now, looking back, really bother me. I won't do it now because then I'll just take forever to make new pages, but I'd like to revise this into a presentable medium-sized comic when I'm done.
Page 18 is almost completed as well (just need to finish painting backgrounds). That will be posted Friday.
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"... I'd like to revise this into a presentable medium-sized comic when I'm done."
I'd love to be able to get a print copy; I hope that's what you're planning! :)