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Lubo Chapter 1 Page 10 by JomoOval (critique requested)

Lubo Chapter 1 Page 10 (critique requested)

JomoOval

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This page was a pain. So many times where I had background overlapping characters and then having part of the same character overlapping part of the background. I should plan that better in the future.

In panel 4 I was stumped a bit http://sta.sh/21z7t3uf5gic?edit=1
I wasn't sure whether or not to put the night shade over the background (Ver A) and I also considered not having any night shade at all (Ver B). I decided to go with this one, where the night shade is only over Lubo and Luna.

The Japanese in Panel 3 (ドーン) reads as "doon" which is usually used for a big impact. And sometimes for dramatic effect.

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    Excellent to see some action poses. We were only seeing folks from the waist up there for a while. It's nice to see your confidence in your own characters grow.