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Lubo Chapter 1 Page 9 by JomoOval (critique requested)

Lubo Chapter 1 Page 9 (critique requested)

JomoOval

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This comic took me a while because of the fact that I have the characters in their pajamas and I was being stubborn about wanting to keep them (particularly Lubo) in their normal outfits for the next scene. But it's for that best that I keep it this way.

Now that it's officially nighttime, I'm not sure whether or not i should continue making the "white space" of the comic whatever the color the sky is based on the time it is in the story. I'll keep at it to see how it goes.

Also I'd like to point out Olaf's hands. This will be how avian characters are drawn (only not so short) for this comic. I might play around with different things though.

Normally, I'd have Japanese onomatopoeia. But because they're coming from things off-screen this time, the reader wouldn't be able to figure out what it's supposed to represent from context. So English sound effects were used in this one. I'll also use English sound effects if they're coming from the mouth of a character.

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    Oh it's a BEARD! God, I thought that was the collar of his sweater the whole time, until you turned his head and I saw the lines went up his face! I had to stare at it for a moment, completely puzzled, before it clicked for me. I must just be slow. I thought he was just very stylish.

    ...I'm having trouble pinning an age on some of these characters. And while that might not be a huge factor since they live alone (grown-ups?), your art style does make it a bit hard to determine. Or who knows, maybe age is a construct here and everyone lives to the ripe age of 20 before they die. It's hard to tell in some comics.

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      Yeah I actually have some character bios that I need to upload soon.