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Lubo Chapter 1 Page 11 by JomoOval (critique requested)

Lubo Chapter 1 Page 11 (critique requested)

JomoOval

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I'm pretty pleased with how this page turned out.

Still not sure whether or not to put the nightshade over panels that have a special background to them. So here's the version of this page without the night shade: http://sta.sh/01k0b9aqc13e

According to the script, I was going to display the time in panel 5 (yes I count the two blank boxes under panel 2 as panels), but then I decided that I didn't not want any text on panels 5 or 6. So I put it in panel 7, where Lubo is finally aware of his surroundings. And no, he's not aware of the time at the moment. That's just for the audience.

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    Seeing them in front of that tree really does put the size of the stump into perspective. But it also makes me wonder what the heck happened to the tree. The noise of bringing it down ALONE would've brought in a lot of people, and a complete lack of debris makes me wonder if something just flew away with the silly thing, hahaha.

    Maybe the bad guys vaporized it...

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      Lol the trees will be explained later. Also they are fairly deep into the forest atm