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Help by Valentine (critique requested)

She asked me could I shut up

the voices in her head

if you asked her what she wanted,

She’d wish that she were dead

Her eyes blue like the sky

Her skin coloured ruby red

And if you asked her what’s the problem

She’d say it was better left unsaid

No it’s not an easy thing

To be close to anyone

But over time, you might find

You could help someone

Begging for the help you need

Won’t pull you from the brink

You could make it on your own

If you’d just stop and think

It doesn't matter anyway

Because I’ll be there for you

To pick you up, and lend you strength

To help you to breakthrough

No it’s not an easy thing

To be close to anyone

But over time, you might find

You could help someone

Help (critique requested)

Valentine

Inspired by some people/events in my life.

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