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Fear and Desire - Part 3: You Know Who Your Friends Are by Tirrell
--Originally Posted February, 2012--
Part 3 of "Fear and Desire". Again, "Moderate" for language.
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(I'm not 'into' it because of the bashing, I'm into it because you've hooked me completely with Sam's predicament)
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Glad you're hooked! ^^
Yeah... hopefully Karma has something nice and just in store for that guy :x
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(smiling) you should know, you're the author :)
but seriously, you've got a knack for creating really hateable antagonistic characters and really believable protagonists! :3
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Well, true enough ;)
Thank you~ I do try hard to make the 'bad guys' believable and not too over the top evil, but still enough that you'd not be fond of them. Same time, there are stories out there i've read with 'perfect' protagonists that just ruin the story, so i try to avoid that, too! :)
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oh... my...
that's just...
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just... woah.
damn, if I saw that happening, I'd be calling the police and then jumping in to help... but...
(BLEEP) that's one brutal anus-face of a character, that Jim.
I'd be jumping in to help with a brick in my hand, nobody should be put through such torture over their sexuality...
goddamn it... I'm definitely gonna keep reading this mini-series, I'm into this story!
jeez, I hope jim knows that Karma is a Bitch, and no, I don't mean a female canid!