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Part 24 - you'll hate me for saying it's another fairly short chapter, but in it, we'll find out a little more about both Erik's and Yuri's motivation...
Enjoy!
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noted - thank you :3
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That was my hope for this chapter, and those around it, given what's happening in the story right now. I'm glad to know you think I pulled it off successfully! ^^
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well, yeah, just goes to show how great of a writer you are!
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hehe, thanks very much~ ^^
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seriously, you're a better writer than those we have to study in English class!
and, you write things that are interesting to read, whereas our class texts are boring as (BLEEP).
seriously :D
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emperorwolf
hey, short chapters are useful...
they build a little something called...
SUSPENSE!
I think you used it well :)