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Against All Odds: Part 23 - Captive by Tirrell

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Against All Odds: Part 23 - Captive

Tirrell

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    Ransom

    Looks like Nathan's mouth finally landed him in serious trouble. What a terrifying experience.

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      Tirrell

      Yep - was all a matter of time unfortunately. Lucky for him he's managed to keep it in check so far. Dread to think what might happen if he were to shoot his mouth off now!

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    emperorwolf

    I feel bad for Nathan, and also feel that Yuri needs to jump in a lake.
    a deep one.
    with an anchor tied to him.
    (pauses, then sighs) too much? did I go overboard? ... (stops, then smirks) like Yuri should? >:D
    lol.

    but still, as always, Tirrell, you are the Elite Author! (is a compliment).

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      Tirrell

      Thanks for the compliment! hehe ^^

      But yes, Yuri certainly has a lot coming to him >:C

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        emperorwolf

        I really think that if AAO gets a sequel, you shouldn't let Yuri out of prison.
        he's a D-O-U-C-H-E-B-A-G.
        ... am I allowed to say that on 'General' posts?
        hm...
        well, whatever.

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    emperorwolf

    Yuri seems like such a manipulative, son of a...
    is there a word paralleling the 'B' word for felines...?
    eh, whatever, he's a (BLEEP).

    I think some rich poacher needs to find Yuri :3 lol.

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      Tirrell

      He's all sorts of bleeps - i think several kinds of bleeps would fit him well xD

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        emperorwolf

        yes, many, many bleeps. :D
        he's definitely the character I dislike most in AAO.

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          Tirrell

          I think many would agree with you on that :)

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            emperorwolf

            I'm sure you do at least :)
            my fav character was probably Alexei, followed by Nathan and then Erik.

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              Tirrell

              Indeed ^^

              I have to say that in terms of fave characters, your order is probably mine, too ^^

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                emperorwolf

                (nods)
                my least faves would be... Yuri followed by Merat&Bogdan, then Maxim.
                maxim's third 'cause I absolutely cannot stand racist people, but I dislike punks like Yuri's gang even more.

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                  Tirrell

                  Poor Maxim :P Some of his views are pretty strong... with a few being out of of line for certain, but he's certainly got nothing on Yuri and his friends! :P