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Part 5 of 'Against All Odds'
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It was :( War is never pleasant, but this one in particular was a harsh experience for the small Polcians that bore the brunt of those early days.
Thank you. I did try hard to get that 'picture' across, without getting caught up in the history -too- much at this point, so I hope the balance was just right~ :)
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oh believe me, it was balanced, and I think that the background of the war really helped reinforce the story!
I really comprehended why maxim and other characters hated each other after reading this (I started from the chapter where Alexei found Nathan just after he'd escaped, just before Alexei's shop was broken into, and read back from chapter one to understand the story fully.)-
Great ^^ Thank you for the feedback on that!
It's good to hear that this part helped to give a bit of a better understanding into the world, the history and its effect on the events of the story. Also glad to know that you happily re-read large parts of it over again! :D
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emperorwolf
...woah...
the war was really... well, really horrible, wasn't it?
you sure know how to 'paint a picture' ...