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Life was rather splendid by Threetails (critique requested)

Life was rather splendid for Edward "Ned" Arrowsmith, the red fox the aircraft
industry press hailed as "Red Ned." In fact, his life was remarkable in that
he'd never had anything really dreadful happen to him.

He was from a family of modest but sufficient means, growing up in those heady
days when Kings Edward and George had ushered the country out of the severe
sobriety of Queen Victoria's reign. He had enough to eat and a place to sleep,
and when it came time to begin studying engineering his family had just enough
to pay.

He was too young to fight in the Great War so he never had to suffer that either;
he was just preparing to begin his studies in earnest around the time the Battle
of Verdun had begun. He'd gotten an internship at Bristol Aircraft after the war,
helping develop new ideas for re-fitting entire fleets of warplanes for civilian
use and by 1930, he was head of the engineering department.

And now... Well, life was really splendid indeed, he thought to himself as he
stood dressing in the plush bedroom of his cottage in the Gloucestershire
countryside. He pulled on a stylish tailored suit, adjusted his trilby, and waxed
his whiskers into smart points. A quick bishop's miter to a Tyrian purple
handkerchief, and he was off.

There was his perfect garden- he'd recently hired a very skilled gardener- and in
the front drive of nice, even gravel sat a smart dark green and primrose Alvis
saloon ready to whisk him away to his job as lead engineer at Bristol Lunar in style
and comfort.

Yes, life was rather splendid... even if one was married to one's career and rather
lonely at times.

Life was rather splendid (critique requested)

Threetails

This little vignette is the opening of my new novel, "DSS Vimana."

"DSS Vimana" starts out in an alternate 1939 where the Second World War has been averted by the emergence of a space race with the Allies and the Axis powers that saw an Anglo-American expedition on the moon by 1937. It gets weirder after this. I'm trying to work in time travel, homoerotic furry romance, and sci-fi with philosophical themes while making something more than a recycled space opera. I want to write something that's still sharp, original, and worth reading, which is going to take some doing.

Slight spoiler: the fox is gay.

I'm going for the setting of a 1930s space opera without the technology or the feel of one. I'm going to do what I did with "Basecraft Cirrostratus" and take known technology of that era down an accelerated path. Rockets had been invented in the 1920s, so a moon landing in '37 is a huge stretch, but technically not "impossible."

Definitely seeking critique on this.

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