on 5 April 2017 at 12:22:17 MDT
this is very creative and good work! I saw that you wanted some honest criticism so I thought i'd help! :) You can take or leave my advice, it's up to you.
i'd suggest making the arms thicker, they are a little thin. I know, I have the same issue sometimes. It can be hard to do ;-;
another thing is add in some clothing lines. That helps to make the work pop! especially if shading is added. Be careful not to do too much, or else it will look like a wrinkly dog rather than a shirt or pants.
other than that, keep up the good work and strive to improve!
on 5 April 2017 at 17:09:11 MDT
Thanks a ton, and indeed thanks for the criticism. It may not come out in my next few pieces, but I do make a concentrated effort to pay attention. I'm still sort of struggling to find my style... having practiced heads and faces most of my life and now kinda playing catchup with the rest of it XD I'm in my 'tutorial hoarding' phase XD
on 5 April 2017 at 19:16:50 MDT
Dude I totally get it! It took me so long to get my style down. I'll be sure to follow you to see improvements in your style! I can't wait! And I get it XD tutorials are 👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻
on 23 June 2016 at 17:48:11 MDT
thank you follow~