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Guilt Passage 2 by Susiron

Guilt Passage 2

Susiron

27 February 2014 at 09:08:19 MST

Previous passage - Next passage x

Wow that took long enough but-- finally a second passage! = u =;
Here's to hoping future ones don't take me as long holy shit

Any critique regarding grammar is wildly appreciated. Also, if at any point you feel a sentence or situation is unclear, feel free to point it out so I can give it a second look.

"Guilt" and its characters belong to me.

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    Ahh you leave so much suspense at the end! I like this a lot. Also really wondering more about Roger and why everyone had been staring at him nervously so much. So many questions!

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      EHEEHEE I'm glad you liked it! CB
      More to come soon hopefully! ; u ;