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Image732.png by sonderjen (critique requested)

Image732.png (critique requested)

sonderjen

Your best isn't good enough.

Keep pushing, god damn it.

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158
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Rating:
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Category:
Visual / Digital

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    I give this an A+ :)

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      CLEARLY, it is a B-

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    I like the details. The portrait joke; that he doesn't have any stamp but F. Success is impossible! or at least you need to talk to the stationery dept.

    I can't parse the sign behind him: I'm guessing it's 'don't stop work' rather than 'dooooooooork' ;)

    Colour and composition are nicely done. I'd only query that his shirt looks a bit grubby with those mottled reddish shadows.

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      I like 'dooooooooork' better than what it really says.

      Thanks for the input! I keep forgetting to apply what I've already learned - must keep that in mind for the next pic. This was also rushed - I felt it needed to go up sooner than the process I've been using lately usually takes (sleep, then finishing touches). Must avoid that when possible.