Some science fiction I wrote, about a city aloft in the clouds of Venus. A bit of cautionary tale if humanity expands without taking care of its problems. I'm not going to claim the science is completely legit, though floating cities on Venus are possible, using Oxygen as a "lighter than air" filler, high above the sulfuric acidic clouds, and where the pressure and temperature is far closer to Earth's. The only problem is, I forgot the highly strong winds in the Venusian atmosphere (around 370 km/h above the clouds), and that is one reason I really dislike the story in the current phase.

I rushed the ending and am not very happy with it; I plan to do a massive rewrite later, though I have other projects I wish to do for now. I was writing it with intent to publish to a magazine that has a strict page limit, hence the rushed nature.

Still, I AM open to critiques! Just keep what I said in mind when reading.

Again, no furries. Just showing off some of my writing for now, take down this slew of stories later.