This is a story plan i had since sophomore year in high school. I had stripped it down and completely rewrote it from it's original write and here it is, improved in story and grammar, etc.
All my stories are open for critique and improvement ideas. Thank you for your time :D
All characters are my own creations.
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jedthedragon
I'm sorry that I can't give you any solid advice, but I'd like to show you someone who can give the advice I want to give better than I can.
https://www.weasyl.com/submission/331967/frank-s-writing-tips-and-bachelor-cookbook-introduction-and-caveats