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Something short and sweet that I wrote just now. Mar is... a very special character to me, but he's more than that. It's hard to describe, but having a conversation with one of my characters was nothing short of heartwarming. Hope you enjoy.
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Wow, I'm glad that you enjoyed this Intrufox! Please, feel free to run with the idea yourself; it's definitely an experience. Mar and I have quite the history; I've been shamed for being him, I've had him outright stolen from me, I've exposed myself in edgy ways with him, and yet he's still there for me after everything. He's a character I aspire to be more like, but sometimes I have to remember that he's just a blue and white furred version of me. Mar is such a sweetheart underneath it all, and I feel so amazed to have such wonderful characters to express myself with.
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Indeed, I look forward to getting the chance to giving it a go myself! My primary character sounds like he falls within some of the same lines as Mar, an idealist creation that at my very best I aspire towards and at worst helps me get through the day...
Penning a conversation of our actual history would be quite an introspective exercise, hopefully not so personal that I would hesitate to post it haha
And feel free to call me Intru if you so desire, intrufox just sounds so official in my mind XD
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If you ever do, I'd be excited to see it! Sorry about that, Intru~ Amusingly enough, I'm currently in the midst of a conversation with someone new I've started speaking with on messengers, and it's funny how we both have to shake off the formal stiffness. xD It's just a thing I do, but at the very least I'm very quick to open up and be myself.
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I wish real life could be a bit like that haha.
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Wow x3 I used to do that as a forum game waaaay back then, "talking with myself", your real self having a talk with your 'sonas or charas. But sheesh, you took it to an extra mile :3
It's touching~ You gave all the signals that there's a lot of untold stuff in this talk. As a hobbyist writer, very well played x3 As a reader, damn you for making me curious again XD
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Aw, thank you! Been wanting to do something like this for awhile, and I chose the character that I've been through the most ups and downs with. I should take my own advice to heart, I think. x_x And like you said, people figure out pretty quickly that I'm actually a pretty big tease, so~ it's only natural that it's in my writings. There is a certain story that I'd probably like to edit and upload here, but I've stayed away from the NSFW stuff so far haha.
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I was guessing it was another sad backstory, but... DUUUUDE, that flew over my head! X#DD Really? Interspecies? >:#3
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I really like this concept (though no sushi? waaaaaaah). Well executed without being cheesy, which I could see this type of piece leaning toward if not written correctly. My only critique is the first paragraph is in a different tense than the rest of the piece, which makes it read awkwardly. Well done!
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The sushi will be for another time, though I did like the idea! Thanks, though. I think I kept it sweet and short, and somehow managed to keep any cheesiness out. You're right about the tenses, though I can't get over how much worse it'd sound if I put it in the past tense. Hm.
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Awww. I sometimes do it too, talking to my characters. I really wish I could say something smarter because this makes me feel a lot but it's hard to put my thoughts together.
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It's the equivalent of telling myself things will get better, I guess, heh. I enjoyed writing it, but I gotta remember to read it more often sometimes. Glad you got some feels out of it though, that gives me a smile.
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Even without knowing the true underpinnings of the emotion and personal connection, that was a very touching short story. Not to mention it's such wonderfully unique idea to have a chat with an alter-ego, in whichever form that may be. Hope you don't mind, but I might very well have to steal that idea to pull on my own characters sometime XD