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Dragon Rage: The First War chp. 52 by Red Dragonette (critique requested)

Dragon Rage: The First War chp. 52 (critique requested)

Red Dragonette

Originally uploaded on Apr 4, 2017

Giftstories taking place during this chapter:
WWotS's characters story 3 -
Randomness-Central's characters story 3 -
RainbowTheAlbinoServal's character story 1 -
Corrinycat's character story 2 -

In the RP, I somehow made the mistake of having Minerva know Bolz's name without him never mentioning it. So I fixed that by having Drake ask for his name, so that everybody knows it.

Facts that might not be mentioned later:

  • After right Minerva suggests taking a tour, Bolz is wondering where his shopkeepers are and if they are worried about him.
  • Bolz never sniffs people he just met.
  • Bolz's hearing is bad, but he can still hear things from a short distance.
  • There are soulstone sisters and a vampire, probably a dragon, among Bolz's shopkeepers.

Atlas, Aeolus, Kathia, Minerva, Danielle, Kylie, Jarilo and Marcus (c) me
Axle, Akil, Juna, Spinx, Azera, Massiva, Luco and Luna (c) lorddraco8967 from
Jason (c) Enkaharal from Deviant Art
Ronan and Drake (c) LordTorch18 (this is his profile: )
Ohimia (c) Randomness-Central from Deviant Art
Bolz (c) Rainbowlight (this is her profile: )

You can see the RP at this following link:

Great War: Dragons vs Humans (c) picknick10 from Deviant Art
Story written by me
Dragon Cave (c) TJ09 (a.k.a. T.J. Lipscomb)

List of chapters
Prologue -
Chapter 1 -
Chapter 26 -
Chapter 51 -
Chapter 52 - Here!
Chapter 53 -
Chapter 54 -
Chapter 55 -
Chapter 56 -
Chapter 57 -
Chapter 58 -
Chapter 59 -
Chapter 60 -

Table of Giftstories -