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Dragon Rage: The First War chp. 59 by Red Dragonette (critique requested)

Dragon Rage: The First War chp. 59 (critique requested)

Red Dragonette

Originally uploaded on Jun 16, 2020

So about the Kathia healing Axle part, you and I know that this is OOC for her. But I wrote that in the RP anyway because I'm hesitant in trying to kill other people's characters. Sure I'll fight them, but auto-killing them is against the rules and I don't want to break the rules. Now I could have kill Axle here in this slight AU, but then that would have led to some major changes to the story in the future, which I try to avoid doing. So, that's why Kathia is sparing Axle for now. Besides, he's a main character and integral to the current plot we have right now.

Differences from the RP:

  • RainbowTheAlbinoServal's last post was this:… and this was before Minerva, Ronan and Drake went into the urban parts of Windfall. So Bolz was written into the fanfic to be consistent with Minerva and friends showing him around.

Facts that might not be mentioned later:

  • Kathia building a human-only city that excludes dragons makes Akil disgusted.
  • Azera knows who the unconscious victim is, but he's keeping that information to himself until he finds out what the hell just happen.
  • He also notices a creeping black spot on Axle and feels his breathing being irregular and shallow when he's carrying him.
  • As the group is returning to camp, Azera knows that something is stalking him with almost no sound or visable movement.

Atlas, Aeolus, Kathia, Minerva, Danielle, Kylie, Hewey, Lady Muckspit, Peachy, Vanillia, Mrs. Merryweather and Gynast (c) me
Axle, Akil, Spinx, Azera and Luco (c) lorddraco8967 from
Ronan and Drake (c) LordTorch18 (this is his profile: )
Sargoth (c) Cenor (this is her profile: )
Bolz (c) RainbowTheAlbinoServal (this is her profile: )

You can see the RP at this following link:

Great War: Dragons vs Humans (c) picknick10
Story written by me
Dragon Cave (c) TJ09 (a.k.a. T.J. Lipscomb)

List of chapters
Prologue -
Chapter 1 -
Chapter 26 -
Chapter 51 -
Chapter 52 -
Chapter 53 -
Chapter 54 -
Chapter 55 -
Chapter 56 -
Chapter 57 -
Chapter 58 -
Chapter 59 - Here!
Chapter 60 -

Table of Giftstories -