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Destruction, Despair, Collapse

I'm falling down.

Beaten, Thrown, Pummeled

I'm falling down.

Why do I keep getting up?

Why do I let myself keep falling down?

I don’t want to fall.

Would it be easier, safer, and less painful to stay down?

Or may I should let myself go.

(NO!!)

But why?

Why am I not crying? Am I not bleeding?

Why am I not giving up? Isn't my past proof that my efforts are useless?

Why keep trying? (Don’t stop now)

Why keep trying? (Don’t Stop Now)

Why keep trying?! (DONT STOP NOW!)

Who are you and why don’t you want me to quit?

(I want to see you succeed)

It won’t happen. I'll keep falling, keep failing.

(Take what you learned)

What good will it do?

(just keep trying)

(just keep trying)

(just keep trying)

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oddeofreq

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