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Flying by oddeofreq (critique requested)

I have flown. Not in a plane. Not on a glider. With nothing but the cloths on my back. i dont know where or how i got the ability but i remember how it works. a running start is helpful but not required. I close my eyes and feel the wind blowing through my hair and across my face. I keep feeling the wind blowing all around me. I Feel the wind blowing so strong that i have to push through it and yet at the same time i am pulling myself through the wind. Like pulling myself on a rope in a river against the current.

I open my eyes.

The earth below is moving quickly underneath me. I can go anywhere. if i stop, it feels like i am pushing myself against the earth to hold myself up. but i have to feel the wind. i have to focus on it. if i cant do that, i cant fly. one time i was sad and i could not feel it. till i fell of a building. then i could.

i guess sometimes you have to fall before you can fly.

Flying (critique requested)

oddeofreq

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