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Cold by oddeofreq (critique requested)

When I get cold.

At first, when I stop resisting,

I feel it pour into me.

I breath it in. It runs through my veins.

Now I can focus. Everything slows down.

All movment becomes smoother.

I can still feel the cold.

But, I dont feel it on me or around me.

I feel it through me and inside me.

My emotions are frozen. Nothing else matters

except my goal. I must complete my goal.

I push forward.

and then...

...wait ... where am I?

Cold (critique requested)

oddeofreq

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