Stage Presence by Gerrark (critique requested)

Stage Presence (critique requested)

Gerrark

27 January 2014 at 18:20:13 MST

My latest free story, for our latest free story winner Ransom. He didn't want porn in the least, but instead a story that fleshed out his character named Zen (as pictured here: https://www.weasyl.com/submission/321418/cds). Not porn???

But seriously, as long as it took I liked writing it. It's a story about friendship, an indomitable spirit, and well, lateral thinking, actually. I hope you like the results as much as he did!

Submission Information

Views:
415
Comments:
2
Favorites:
5
Rating:
General
Category:
Literary / Story

Comments

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    A very lovely story - always nice to see one that can involve micro, but not be fetishy. ^^ I think you fleshed out the character of Zen very very well!

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      Thank you for the lovely compliment! I tried my best, and it's really nice to see other people enjoying it so much.