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And as we paint these markings on our face,
Grab our hostile weapons,
Kill the damned and undeserving,
We are crowning a new empire.
Leaders of the Land,
Monarchs of the Main,
Dictators of the Distance,
Rulers of the Realm.
We don't need a Heaven.
We don't need a Hell.
B E L I E V E I N Y O U R S E L F
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Thank you so much for the comment, I really appreciate the feedback! :) I was thinking about using different textures as well, so thank you for pointing out that other textures could look nice with it. c:
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I can't think of anything I'd advise you change or any flawed pieces, the composition is pretty stellar with the intimate gaze of the eyes, the type is legible and easy to read even as it blends into the background, it doesn't contrast with it either. The luminosity really brings it out with the tribal imagery of markings, it drives the type's point home of finding something almost primal within you. You could try using different textures, or typefaces and comparing how they do against the original, but as far as I'm aware that's it, as by itself it's a really strong piece.