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Ominous Light by EvinousX (critique requested)

Ominous Light (critique requested)

EvinousX

"He kneeled down to look at Mojo and pulled him out of the water with his own cuts burning viciously, leaving Adelric underwater. He couldn't see if either of them was alive or dead. Brobro ran his hand down Mojos face and began to cry, saying, “Mojo, no…no…” He felt himself getting weaker, blood starting to pour out more. The orbs were fading away and the ability for him to stay awake was going away too. He lied down beside Mojo and started to black out again, the world around him getting small and dark."

--Roleplay

ANYWAYS this is a new style, based off of the videogame Okami. :3

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    really nice dynamic pose.

    I would say watch the line weight, its a little muddy. Try to make the lines cleaner if possible. And his left hand is a bit small, even though I know you are going for a hand in perspective.

    Great job overall! Im excited for what you do next

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      Thank you for the feedback! I was trying to work with perspective here haha. xD

      And also the lines are meant to be muddy, its supposed to be like an ink styled drawing. Something like an old Chinese calligraphy thing. :)