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Character design by Daoni (critique requested)

Character design (critique requested)

Daoni

Submission Information

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337
Comments:
8
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Rating:
General
Category:
Visual / Digital

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    Oh yeah, myself. The head is too large.

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      Thanks myself. How may I repay you for this important information that is entirely obvious?

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        No need to pay for anything, you're cheap and want the cheapest. That's why you feel terrible all the time. Due to not wanting to pay for anything, you have become what you paid for. Cheap or worthless.

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          Wow. You gave me critique and since I enjoy micromanaging and being a dictator, I am entirely offended that you are not simply kissing butt and telling me pleasant, generic, unhelpful comments such as "nice", "looks good", and the all so glorious "there's something good/bad and I'm not saying what it is". I only accept critique in those forms, leaving me blind of any shortcomings and potential learning situations.

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            Detailed criticism with examples, references, citations, tutorials, step by step instructions, strengths, and weaknesses in a clear format.

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              Wow. You have disobeyed my orders, despite me having not paid for anything in my life and having this redundant "I am everyone's boss" or "Do as I say, not as I do" philosophy. I am going to cry in a corner now and complain. Blocked, muted, banned, kicked, and unfollowed on Twitter.

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    This piece looks nice! I like how abstract the concept is, as if it's a totem or idol of some sort. That said, it appears to be missing something... a background, perhaps. The subject appears to be floating in a smokey white void, leaving me to wonder what the context of this is. Assuming I did get the nature of the subject correct, perhaps some details of a shrine, or wherever this may be located would serve to ground it in reality. Also the comments section seems to hold an abundance of sodium, which, in moderation, can be delightful. In these quantities, however, the spice spoils the broth a bit, drawing attention away from the other, more palatable flavors and towards the vitriol of the chef.

    All in all, not bad. With some grounding and less salt, I think this piece could be considerably better in the end.

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      I preferred an ominous look the steam gave. I had considered adding a more complex scene. Without more background on the character, I am leaving it somewhat vague.