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A Brave New World-Prolouge by Kakiookami (critique requested)

"So, you want know more about the Dragon Seals? That's why you picked up this book, is it not?

No matter, as some would rather to learned more about the Dragons then something created by Mankind. After all, Dragons are an old and powerful race, since the creation of the universe itself. I'm not familiar about their origin, as most aren't. Only one man, one thing truly knows about their birth, but this isn't that story, or his adventures. That's another tale to be told.

"Nor is the tale about this civilization that had created the species. They are a young race, and have a long life to fulfill still. Since the intergalactic war, I had been studying everything about the seven species that called their two galaxies, Uneepa and Danner, their home. I find it quite fascinating how they are so similar to us, yet so different in many ways. They had built one of the universes most peaceful and stable socialites. How this was achieved was a marvelous study of their history, and I only wished we talked to them rather than raging war."

"That was a long time ago, in my life time at the least. My name is Cich, and although this is my tale, this isn't about me, nor my own race. This story is about my study on this species, and how they came to be a prominent force in our world. How they started off nothing but caged creatures to a species which can support themselves among our civilization. Since learning the events unfold, which had nearly destroyed them and their planet home too, I been very eager to know more about the Dragon Seals."

"This is their tale; this is the story of the Darjeets."

A Brave New World-Prolouge (critique requested)

Kakiookami

Part one of my first short story, Darjeets of Araqurin-A Brave new World.

Remaster and edited as best of my ability's. The other parts will come when i get the files formatted

To the Next part, https://www.weasyl.com/submission/76966

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    Ah, dragon anthropology... and in space! This ought to be interesting.

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    well the first book doesn't involve traveling in space, that's book three.

    but the series dose involve living with an high tech civilization.