Commentary:
This is probably the first page I've ever done all the images before putting text on. Usually I figure out speech bubble placement before I start coloring the page, but the dialogue was pretty light on this page, so I thought I might try out a different order. I heard that "lettering" is done last, so I might switch that that order with a new art program I want to use.
I'm also going to start doing English translations for the Japanese onomatopoeia I've been doing. Hopefully it doesn't look too out of place with the way I did it.
Earlier this chapter I had a panel of Mako noticing Jamon walking through town. That was a hint at this scene.
Renz the Wolverine from omegafolf on furaffinity
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