Lunar Autumn - Back by zuckerdachs (critique requested)

Lunar Autumn - Back

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Lunar Autumn - Front

Crowspeaker and Erin.

Lunar Autumn - Back (critique requested)

February 16, 2013 at 02:32:20 UTC

The rear view for lunarhelix's reference sheet.

Pose partially referenced from a stock photo by Rekit on dA.

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QTMelon on February 18, 2013 at 03:31:26 UTC

Very coy pose! It looks like you're having issues with the scapula and arm in the viewing right. I like the fetlocks on the cow. One other thing I noticed is that you may want to change the line of one of the buttocks to relaxed since it looks like you are emphasizing contrapposto. Nice inks
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  zuckerdachs on March 3, 2013 at 22:07:37 UTC
  
  Thank you for the great crit! I'm still kinda fumbling around blindly with bone structure. What would you suggest I change about the scapula and arm? I might revisit this at some point to see if I can improve it.
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    QTMelon on March 4, 2013 at 14:49:30 UTC
    
    Well if you can find reference of people doing similar poses it will definitely help. I will see if I can get some time in to show some suggestions as well if you don't mind.
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      zuckerdachs on March 5, 2013 at 00:48:47 UTC
      
      That would be lovely, thank you. :)