I like the overall shape, though it's not totally perfect, the style works for what you're doing. Your ink lines are great in some spots (like the ears, spot on!) but in others, like the tail, belly and legs/thighs they are clearly sloppy. When I say sloppy, I don't just mean you can see the pencil work (that's an easy fix) but the weight of the lines are inconsistent and wobbly. The legs are also varying sizes as well and I noticed the paws are cut out so either they didn't turn out well or you didn't draw them, either way you should practice! Little issues with anatomy will get better as you practice anatomical drawings. I also noticed that in some areas, like the jaw line/muzzle line, stomach line, and that bit of thigh line, and the ears/eyes, which are all done in pencil would have probably looked better with ink (not a heavy line but a light one). I like what you tried doing with shading and colour though! Very light pink was a good touch, though the shading around the neck would have looked more in place with the picture if it was also added to the other places that would need shading (belly, inside legs, etc). Honestly, these are all things that I myself need to work on as well, and it takes a lot of time, but you have a lot of talent and a good idea, with a style that will surely bloom as you continue to grow as an artist! I love the little mole and the tiny bits of detail you've added that are subtle and not distracting.