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Skyline by Wolftacular (critique requested)

Skyline (critique requested)

Wolftacular

First submission here, last song I've written and recorded. Sadly, I don't have a unique thumbnail for it, so that will have to do.

Originally created for a songwriting tournament. Yes, I won that round ^^

Had a ton of trouble with this one because moving, unpacking, no space, broken microphone, and as always, mixing/production trouble because I just SUCK at it... BUT I DID IT. And I'm quite proud of it, regardless of shit audio quality. I hope y'all enjoy it! I really put a lot of effort into the melodies and instruments!

[Written and performed by Wolftacular]

[Lyrics]

Open up and listen

It is you who I want near

I know my voice isn't

Something you are used to hear

I want to show you places

And fly through all the spaces

But I'm mistaken

This fantasy is shaken

I lived the most confusing dream

About an angel who spoke to me

And though my head can make things seem

I've faith that this one might truly be

But if you're really up there now

Are you just planning to leave me here?

Why don't you fly and come right down

So you can pluck me right off this sphere

You have not been dreaming

I've had my eyes on you

But they'd call this scheming

We could never make it true

I want to break the skyline

Renounce to what's divine

But I would risk

Your life and more

I've gone in circles in my head

And my decision I have reached

So prepare your wings to spread

And I will do anything you preach

Please forget it all

It's impossible to do

You and I are small

They'd cut us both right through

Of all the stars in heaven

You're the one who's made me leaven

But it's forsaken

We must both awaken

If I could change the rules

Or fight against those fools

You know I'd do it

But I can't come through with it

It is best to leave you

Pretend I only deceived you

I'm gone forever

Forget this endeavor

I lived the most confusing dream

About an angel who loved me

And though the stars can make things seem

I've faith that this one someday I'll see

So if you're really up there now

I hope you're warm, safe and well

And if you ever do come down

I know the skyline will be where you fell

Submission Information

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    Let me just follow you obsessively. :P

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      Permission granted :P I'll eventually upload more stuff here (when I grow used to the site and stuffs) but if you, or anyone who's reading, would like to listen to other stuff from me LET ME KNOW ;^;

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        I definitely would. This genre is great, but if you do others, it'd be great to hear.