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The Night Master by Ultima228 (critique requested)

The Night Master Statted:

Beast Compsites:
Nightwalker, Nightwing, Shadow Dragon

Properties/Abilities:
Crush Item, Desecrating Aura, Evil Gaze, Summon Undead, Magic Drain, Aversion to daylight, Telepahty, Immunity to cold, Perfect Darkvision, Wings (useable for flight), Tail, for smash attacks

Newly added:
Unhealing wounds Disease, Fear Aura

Spells:
Grand Ray of Frost
Beam of Darkness
Dimensional Door
Able to cast up to level 6 Divine Spells.

Stats: Modifier
Strength: 48 +19
Dexterity: 13 +1
Constitution: N/A N/A
Intellegence: 30 +10
Wisdom: 30 +10
Charisma: 28 +9

Type of Creature:
Lord of the Undead, General to Omega

Challenge Rating: 30

Detailed Stats:
Hit Dice: 42d12 + 0 + 66 (318 Average, 570 Maximum)
Size: Gargantuan
Inititive: -5
Base Attack Bonus: +31
Grapple Modifier: +66
Armor Class:
Damage Reduction: 20 Silver, 20 Good or Epic
Spell Resistance: 45
Attacks: 2 Claws (+5 weapons), Slam, Wing Bash, Grand Ray of Frost, Beam of Darkness, Crush, Tail Swipe

Equipment:
2 Claws, natural weapons counting as +5 weapons that are classified as evil and epic for piercing damage reduction

Beam of Darkness:
A 200 foot long blast of pure energy. It is pure black and requires a DC 35 Reflex Save for half damage. It deals 10d6 Non-Elemental Damage (Not Force or Sonic or any of the elements)

Grand Ray of Frost:
Everybody knows that little Ray of Frost spell, that does 1d4 cold damage, this is that spell, on mega steroids. This spell does a whopping 4d12's of cold damage at a 150 foot range. A DC 30 Reflex Save can be made for half, a secondary save of 30 also must be made to avoid being frozen for 1d4 Rounds.

Unhealing Wounds Disease:
This desease takes 1d8 of the damage inflicted by the attack roll and converts it into maximum HP damage. This effect cannot be cured by a non-divine sorce. Even arcane magic to heal diseases cannot cure this. The disease itself is not contagious unless the victum were to die from it, in which case they are raised as an undead (varrying upon the level of the vitcum they may be lesser or greater) with this disease on any natural weapons.

Feat List:
Improved Un-armed Strike
Improved Grapple
Stunning Fist
Leadership
Combat Expertise
Improved Disarm
Power Attack
Improved Sunder
Lunging Strike
Spell Penitration
Greater Spell Penitration
Spell Mastery
Toughness x2
Epic Toughness x2

Information/Introduction:
In the distance lumbers a creature straight from the pits of Oblivion. The creature from out of pure darkness, with it, a rising horde of undead. They wash upon the lands like a blighted tide would wash away the earth. All of those who fall to it's power are brought back again as it's undead minions. This creature's army is nigh invicible and under the dark of the moon-lit night this creature will destroy all your hope and leave you with nothing but true despair. Those who have lived to tell the tail of this creature, descripe it as something out of a nightmare, for it truly is. Standing well over 500 feet tall it's skin is that of the scales from a Shadow Dragon with a whip-like tail that could snap a tree trunk in half. It's massive wings granting the beast the power of flight and it has the same cold, dead, un-moving, unblinking eyes of a Nightwalker. Even the creatures that rise up around it fear it, and for a good reason. This creature is that of a nightmare, and is even accompanied by a Draco-lich of no small power. It was an ancient great wyrm Red, risen to even greater heights. So very few have stood in this monster's path and lived to tell the tale, those that have, are absolutely terrified of the night, and would tell all those around them to fear it, for it is in the night that this monster rises and strikes. Each night the moon stays longer, it hangs in the air more and more, as this creature is cleansing and preparing the world for the arrival of it's master.

Omega.

The Night Master (critique requested)

Ultima228

The Nightmaster. A fell creature that is truly the lord of all undead. One of Omega's elite generals from the very pits of Oblivion.

This creature walks in the night, and when it rises, so does the moon last longer as a sign of the coming eternal darkness that is known as Omega.

In the great battle to save all the realms from the threat of Omega, the hero who wielded Ranpushin, Arashi Naiya, unleashed the Ultimate Release, becoming one with the mighty dragon of light, and in one stroke of their blade, this creature was reduced to ash by the divine light of hope.

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