So, as I promised in my most recent journal on FA (http://www.furaffinity.net/journal/5552045/), I'm gonna work more on my art so I have less to bash on it. That being said, I'm gonna just make some simple self-constructive-criticisms TRYING MY HARDEST not to be too harsh.

1) legs are too thick, too short, and too low.
2) arms are too thin.
3) shoulders need some outside guidance.
4) crotch looks funny; legs don't quite come together quite right.
5) arm muscles look skimpy and weird
And 6) the head positioning needs some retuning.

And that's it. Jordayne has volunteered to be the victim of this strains to overcome hatred particular wip, unless someone wants THEIR character in it's place...any takers?