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War Breeze Armor by OfficiallyRetired (critique requested)

War Breeze Armor (critique requested)

OfficiallyRetired

Character design sketch (front view) made for LadySnakeBite for her really rad sounding project of her unicorn princess, War Breeze.

The plate armor crafted into feather like shapes in areas of her armor, her under dress is chain mail if the details are hard to see. It is hard to tell but this drawing is in colour, the unicorn is white and wears white silk, her armor is gilded in white gold.

~ Steph, 2011

Would love to get some critique on the design work (not the drawing) if you have any : )

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    Some negative space is left up at the top left, but apart from that,this is absolutely phenomenal! The amount of detail you put into the armor and chain mail is crazy

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    I'd say that due to everything being the same color, it's pretty hard to make out details without really staring at it! Specifically up in the chest/shoulder/arms, there could be some more contrast or even more details (the wide expanse of chest matches the large arm thingies) that help break up what's reading as flat space c: