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Against All Odds: Part 9 - Delays by Tirrell

Against All Odds: Part 9 - Delays

Tirrell

Part 9 of 'Against All Odds'

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    was Alexei actually asking Nathan what his inner voice thought he was? was he being 'more than friendly' ?
    or was Nathan right, just 'friendly' ?

    also, lol, funny analogy with the hugging; "any harder and you'll be struggling to breathe"
    really puts the scene in an interesting light :)

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      Naw, that was Nate getting so worked up (like he does a lot!) that he managed to have an internal argument with himself :P

      Hehe, yeah I think most hugs from Alex would be pretty firm, even if he didn't mean for it! ^^

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        'course, he'd learn to be gentler over time, wouldn't he :)

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          by the way, arguing with himself is similar to the term "Psychomachia" which is an internalised battle between the spirit and the flesh, like what it seems Nathan had.

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            Really? I guess Nate needs to chill the interalising before he gets a named condition assigned to him! :P

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              ha ha ha :D

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                just so you know, it's pronounced "psycho-ma-hi-a"
                weird, right?

                although, I do think it was funny when he got told "I am you!" (chuckles) he burned himself :)

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                  a little weird, yeah!

                  hehe - you know it's bad when you're losing arguments to yourself :P

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                    well, I can't argue with that logic :)
                    ha ha ha ha ha!

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          No doubt :)