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On Watch by Threetails (critique requested)

Alone with the sound of music from the dugout,

Taking my tea with the dregs from the rum jug,

Feeling the warm dry winds of July,

The silent guns had me think that

the war was over and I

Could stand beneath the sky

and think I was home

in Somerset

Till a shot

Rang out.

On Watch (critique requested)

Threetails

Inspired by the quiet sectors of the Western Front, where the nights were almost silent.

This wasn't intentional, but if you look the shape of the poem kind of resembles the foreshortened outline of a Lee-Enfield rifle.

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